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Re: The Cracks
Yeah, "nigger" really is a dirty word, and I hate it, and I assure you, I was using it in what may be the only appropriate sense that I, a ...
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: Seasons
(Does anyone know how to make tabs work?) Seasons For Charlie, whose incredible writing style and view of the world I tried to steal for this. It can never live ...
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: The Cracks
Indeed, I loath you.
Apr 4, 2006 -
Re: A Prayer to Allah
We don't understand the world, but wise men understand God, they become God. The world, that's quite a different matter. Wise men aren't vengeful. Unwise men are. God isn't vengeful, ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: The Cracks
Mmm. It was forced at first, then I got into the rhythm of it. Mulled that bit over for a few days, too. I needed to end on a good ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: Why write?
that was, most definitely, sarcasm when I said that. I'm not that stupid.
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: use me
You're hilarious, Brad. I mean it in a good way :D I like it, though. I really do. I don't think it's cliche, particularly. I think it's good, and I ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: I love you mother.
Damn your sweet lips and autobiographic stories!
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: The Cracks
The Cracks 4-2-06 I. Living between each-other’s cracks, my insides are massaged by these impermanent curves. Still, my thirst is never satiated. Let woman be nigger. Let man be nigger. ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: avalanche
The first stanza was quite wonderful. Liked the rest of the poem, too, but I love the first stanza. I really like the pacing, too, with the * thing. Good ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: Crocodile
You show promise. I love the words "beguiled", "beseeched" and "aught". Very good. The story sort of trails off, doesn't it? You have a good story going, and then you ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: Turning coffee into Wine
There was really some fantastic language in there. A lot of it. Yet I had difficulty reading lots of ways, it dragged as I read it. Use that data as ...
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: graveyards and roses (me and you)
quite lovely. I can't see any easy way it could be better, nor do I want to look. I really enjoyed it.
Apr 3, 2006 -
Re: Why write?
First off, I love life. I love existence. I don't love pain, but I'm lucky enough that I really don't live in a world of it, anymore. So I love ...
Apr 2, 2006 -
Re: I love you mother.
Without a doubt, the best story I have read in my entire life.
Apr 2, 2006
